LostXOR@fedia.io to Greentext@sh.itjust.works · 3 days agoAnon finds a hutfedia.ioimagemessage-square56fedilinkarrow-up1566arrow-down120
arrow-up1546arrow-down1imageAnon finds a hutfedia.ioLostXOR@fedia.io to Greentext@sh.itjust.works · 3 days agomessage-square56fedilink
minus-squareDiddlydee@feddit.uklinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up39·3 days agoI can see the intention of the story, but how you wouldn’t notice many windows on a small hut when you approached makes it not work for me.
minus-squareLostXOR@fedia.ioOPlinkfedilinkarrow-up13·3 days agoMaybe there’s none on the side of the hut Anon approaches from?
minus-squaremortemtyrannis@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up3·3 days agoAlso the lighting. If it’s dark outside how do you light up a person looking into a window in a way they appear as a painting instead of weird shadows.
I can see the intention of the story, but how you wouldn’t notice many windows on a small hut when you approached makes it not work for me.
Maybe there’s none on the side of the hut Anon approaches from?
Also the lighting. If it’s dark outside how do you light up a person looking into a window in a way they appear as a painting instead of weird shadows.