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minus-squareObjectivityIncarnate@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up17arrow-down2·2 days agoThis is two panels too long, imo. Change the first panel’s text to “Forgive me, Helen, I’ve changed!”, the second’s to “Have you, Theseus?”, and you’re done, lol.
minus-squarex00z@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up4·2 days agoI needed the little punchline in panel 3 to remember it.
minus-squareZozano@aussie.zonelinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·2 days agoWho stop there? Make it one panel with stacked speech bubbles.
minus-squareObjectivityIncarnate@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up8·2 days agoThe punchline should be on its own panel to create a natural temporal gap between it and the setup, for the reader. :)
minus-squareidunnololz@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·2 days agoinsert joke of Theseus here Please clap.
This is two panels too long, imo.
Change the first panel’s text to “Forgive me, Helen, I’ve changed!”, the second’s to “Have you, Theseus?”, and you’re done, lol.
I needed the little punchline in panel 3 to remember it.
Who stop there? Make it one panel with stacked speech bubbles.
The punchline should be on its own panel to create a natural temporal gap between it and the setup, for the reader. :)
insert joke of Theseus here
Please clap.
Please Clap